The Poetry Corner

[Kairi]

I thought it would be easier to create a mini poetry section instead of having a bajillion threads with just one poem on each haha so if anyone has any poems they'd like to share, post them here!

I wrote this for an English assignment this past year. I'm no poet, but my teacher thought it was really good.

“Flickering”
Our feelings began to glow
Outside when the air was hot
As the cool air began to blow in
The feelings started to dim down

You said you had feelings
But you were afraid of causing pain
Since then, the feelings burned out
The burning flame in my heart was extinguished

Then that old feeling began to flicker up again
A small, little light illuminated in the darkness
Is this light supposed to keep burning?
Or will it just end up smothered again?

[Narora Uchimaki]

I thought it would be easier to create a mini poetry section instead of having a bajillion threads with just one poem on each haha so if anyone has any poems they'd like to share, post them here!

I wrote this for an English assignment this past year. I'm no poet, but my teacher thought it was really good.

“Flickering”
Our feelings began to glow
Outside when the air was hot
As the cool air began to blow in
The feelings started to dim down

You said you had feelings
But you were afraid of causing pain
Since then, the feelings burned out
The burning flame in my heart was extinguished

Then that old feeling began to flicker up again
A small, little light illuminated in the darkness
Is this light supposed to keep burning?
Or will it just end up smothered again?

Not bad Star. flows real good. if i had a rating system it would be 8/10 XD nice job.

[Riku]

well, i like it kairi!!! but im not too good :/!!!
anywayz, here are some of my lyrics (i found them while i dug my room)
(while you reading, try to understand the point of the words )

I can't leave my dream
because there's a place you love me
something that can't be true.

My dreams are like your smiles
the hours without you, are heavy rain(not the game ^^)
inside my hearts garden!
I'm afraid the risk that i have to take
because i can't live without you.

If i say something wrong then you'll go away,
so i will watch the sea which hug you!
and leave my love lying far away!

A darkness world in me,
the light out of you,
lock up my chains and keep me dead!!!

Now im gonna translate some other lyrics which i wrote them in my language (greek)!!!

One morning like any other
i saw you lying on my bed,
kisses and hugs like a dream of past!!!

Pen is my hand, words is my life and paper is my heart!!!

Her whisper is like a spell,
and my soul is magic

World has change,
and keeps to change...
lights and shadows
all in one yeah in one
i think that someone is walking behind me
its like too many demons following me
demons of today and hell of tomorrow
the life that i live!!!

Thats what i know to do better,
yeah do it, run!
Run as far you can and climb as high its possible!

People are change
and the solar S is change...
people's souls eating our inside
and without fear you can hide!!!

well thats a start of my bullshits... please kiddin with me as you can cauze when i will see you im gonna punch your face !!! no really, i dont have problem if you wanna hinch me and kiddin with me and say whatever... i have a book that i write some of my thoughts and thats what you read... i have a lot of these craps...

All eyez on ME